CHARACTERS:
Johnny Tan, Student
Johnny’s Mom
Johnny’s Friends
Narrator
FADE IN
LONG SHOT OF HOSPITAL ENTRANCE
It is nighttime. There is an ambulance in front of a hospital with a few people waiting outside. We head the sound of a siren and people shouting.
DIP TO BLACK
FADE IN
ECU of FLOWER PETALS
It is day time. Flower petals are falling from trees indicating the end of a season. SAD MUSIC PLAYS.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
It was over. Johnny Tan was no more.
ZOOM OUT to show narrator standing below a tree facing the camera. He is looking somewhere to his front left. Hesitation and restraint mark his eyes.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
I nervously took off my hat and gently
placed my hand over his mom’s shoulder.
ZOOM OUT to show that the narrator had his left hand placed on the mother’s shoulder. The mother had her face covered with a handkerchief. We can tell that she is crying.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
She was crying like there was no tomorrow.
But I couldn’t bring myself to say a word.
To make any kind of sense out of it, we
need to go back six years, back to the day
I first met “him”.
DIP TO WHITE
BEGIN FLASHBACK:
FADE IN
MS of a group photo of Johnny surrounded by his friends. They are all smiling and look as if they are having fun. PAN camera from left to right, stop at Johnny’s face in the center.
XFADE to LS of Johnny playing sports
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Johnny was nothing short of a comedian,
always playing pranks on students and
teachers alike. Not a particularly bright
student but he knew what he wanted in life.
XFADE to MS of Johnny giving inspirational speech. He looks as if he is displaying great leadership skills and all the people watching are impressed and/or inspired.
JOHNNY
My dream is to become a DOCTOR!
NARRATOR (V.O.)
I admired his sheer determination and
now looking back; watching Johnny
putting up with his studies always cheered
me up. All I wanted was to see him smile
again.
CUT TO
BLACK FRAME
NARRATOR (V.O.)
But dreams can easily turn into a nightmare.
SPLITSCREEN in the CENTER
LEFT HALF FADE IN
ECU of F grade from an assignment.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Reality hit him like a point blank shot
straight in the face. Johnny simply wasn’t
cut out to become a neurosurgeon.
RIGHT HALF FADE IN
CU of Johnny in a depressed state. His head facing down gritting his teeth. We hear people are whispering behind his back.
JOHNNY
There’s got to be a mistake!
DISSOLVE
LEFT HALF XFADE
Johnny gets pushed away by the classmates who shun him because he is a failure.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
People around him told him that he
did not belong here. Even his advisor
urged him to try something else as
a career.
RIGHT HALF XFADE
Johnny gets refused a seat at the canteen by his classmates.
CUT TO
Textbooks which have accumulated on the table. On the wall, there is a calendar. It is visible from the calendar that almost all the dates are taken up with several tasks or project work. PAN RIGHT to reveal Johnny grabbing his head in frustration.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Sometimes you feel that school is just
being mean and before you had time
to sort out your personal problems, projects,
assignments and your duties as a student
leader had piled up at your doorsteps.
Bad grades followed by depression.
Almost sounded like a cliché.
FADE OUT
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT’D)
But the truth is nothing is a cliché
when it’s happening to you.
FADE IN
CU of suicide notes. Torn pieces of paper on the table. Notes and books in a mess. There are scribbles on the table top. On a piece of paper, the words “I GIVE UP!” are clearly written with a stickman being hanged.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
One thing was certain, you push a
man too far and sooner or later
he’d reach the end of the rope.
Sound of a chair falling on the ground. Then silence.
SPLITSCREEN 1/3 VERTICAL
LEFT FADE IN
MS of left hand holding a rope. Chair toppled over in the background. Uplifting music starts.
CENTER FADE IN
MS of right hand holding a NUS mascot or jacket.
RIGHT FADE IN
MS of Johnny with a reflexive look on his face. ZOOM IN the face until photo takes the full screen.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
For a brief moment back then,
Johnny remembered why he came
here in the first place…
XFADE
Multiple shots of the recounts of Johnny’s memorable times quickly fade in and out of the screen with the CU shot of his reflexive face still in the background. Sounds of laughter play in the background with high level of reverberation. Sounds of himself saying out loud “My dream is to become a doctor” also plays.
XFADE
Expression on Johnny’s face changes to one with determination.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Legend has it there was a place in
this world where thousands of dreams
came true every year.
FADE OUT
BLACK FRAME. Music ends.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT’D)
And Johnny chose to trust this place.
FADE IN
REVERSE SHOT of narrator with left hand on mom’s shoulder. From the back they seem to be looking upwards. TILT UP to show the UCC. Then CUT TO same shot with mom crying. Finale music starts playing.
NARRATOR
Let’s go, he’s waiting for us inside.
FADE OUT
BLACK FRAME
NARRATOR
Johnny Tan was no more. He had finally found where he belonged.
Starting today, he is Dr. Tan.
The same music keeps playing throughout the logo/credits.
Now, we can see clearly how you are going to implement your assignment. Good!
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